Undeniably, it has been widely recognized that books have been playing an essential role of kids. Encouraged by parents and teachers, students tend to read a wide range of books, such as science fiction, novels, detective stories and etc. In this case, those books will definitely have a deep and far-reaching impact on them mentally and psychologically. This point can be best illustrated with the case of me. When I was in my high school, I have been interested in literature. Therefore, I have read a huge amount of famous novels and ancient poems. Influenced by those books, I have made a determination to study Chinese in my college and dreamed of publishing my own novels one day. After years of arduous efforts, I finally fulfilled my goals.

　　Besides, thanks to the technological innovation, the digital technology, such as television, the Internet and the cell phone, has become more accessible to students that an increasing number of students have been addicted to them. For example, in American, it has been estimated that kids between the ages of 10 to 16 spend an average of six hours a day in front of a screen. Without appropriate censorship, the current TV programs are saturated with violent and pornographic contents. It is every likelihood that kids are susceptible to the side effects to them. Plus, the overwhelming amount of advertising on the TV, radio and the internet will easily sway the opinions on students who are too young to have autonomy and personal judgment.

　　More importantly, students have been easily influenced by their peers at present. Traditionally, the test-orientated educational philosophy rendered students concentrate their minds on studying alone. They seldom spend time hanging out with classmates and friends. However, things have changed considerably. Not only schools but also parents have put a premium on fostering the inter-personal skills of the kids. Thus, kids have been encouraged to participate into various kinds of activities with peers. Therefore, on the one hand, students have got acquainted with many new chums and gained valuable friendship. On the other hand, they have been deeply influenced by their friends. For example, recently, a lot of students are likely to purchase fancy clothes and accessories and this trend is not restricted with wealthy students but also evident among poorer students. It is the peer pressure that impels youngsters to follow suit.

　　可以看出来，很多句型都是出自那本小嶷的书，真的很感激那本书啊论证的方式很多，最有效用的我个人认为是例证和逻辑论证。例证毋庸置疑就是用例子来论证，比较形象，比较贴切，可以源自日常生活，当然如果来自历史事件啊，名人轶事更好，如果知识面没涉及那么多，也无所谓，从个人的例子就可以了。逻辑论证，我认为很难，因为他需要对语言和知识的面都宽，但是如果论证好的话，会加分很多啊。可以看出，我的每段第一句的联系词也很重要哦。

　　结尾段，我没在结尾段下太大力气，我觉得如果可以达到善始善终最好，开头漂亮，结尾也漂亮，但是如果没有那个气力，结尾段就总结之前写的就可以了，不要太长，当然要完整，不能草草结尾就好。
　　In conclusion, with the rapid development of information technology, students could acquire knowledge and information from more diversified sources. They are, by no means, the solely listeners of their teachers. As a consequence, teachers have less influence on students than they were in the past.
　　以上的结尾段还是运用了一些小嶷书中的句型。所以，会背句型还不够，关键是必须运用在自己的写作中去。上述我贴出的文章一共519字。算比较长吧。
　　日期：2015-10-13 23:08:00
　　我想说练习真的很重要，我在第一考托福之初写了20多篇大作文，这次复习写了40多篇，押题不是最重要的，最重要的是不断的运用，找到那种感觉。对于每天工作用中文的我来讲，只能在自己联系的时候多用英文写写了。我的这40多篇文章每篇几乎都是500-530字，如果再长我怕到考试时写不完。当然不是越来越好，我觉得不提倡为了写而写，必须有意义的写。我只是想告诉大家作为一个展现英语语言能力的考试，作文写长一点没有什么不好的。关于练习时间，楼主白天上班，有时候会抽中午午休的时候在电脑上默写那些句子，一个中午的狂敲，让同事都觉得很好奇在写什么，一般10点之后才能安静下来复习，周末有时也没时间复习，有时去单位比较清静的环境复习听力和阅读。对于口语，楼主借助良好的写作能力总结了100多个段子，虽然最后口语成绩一般（也是因为一直没好好复习这块），但是写口语段子也是提高写作的方法啊。

　　总结一点，托福大作文没什么好怕，紧扣自己认为好的一本或两本书，死扣书中讲解，多背，多写，多练，锻炼自己在短时间内，最好是30到60秒内脑子里整理出写作大纲的能力，然后你会觉得自己简直就是下笔如有神啊。
　　对于小作文，我两次碰到的题目都不难，也是参考了小嶷那本书后面对于小作文的讲解，不过在考试中只要听力的点记住了，都写进去了，那个模板的意义我个人认为不大。抓住思路最重要了。
　　优异的成绩是靠辛勤的汗水浇灌出的。这句话与大家共勉。马上又要回到GMAT的复习了，在职考G也是亚历山大。希望大家可以借鉴我在托福作文复习上的经验。希望我的文字可以帮助更多的同学！
　　日期：2015-10-13 23:11:00
　　以上是我在去年考完托福之后写的托福作文准备心得，因为楼主两次托福考试作文单项都是满分，所以写了一篇心得，之前一直在国内某学习论坛上放着，很多人也受益了，如今放在天涯上，希望也能帮到更多的考托福的朋友。文章里推荐了一本书，话说在前面，我可不是推销书的，我就是复习了那本书取得了好成绩的。谁问我怎么复习的，我都这样推荐。希望不要“乱喷”哈
　　日期：2015-10-13 23:15:00
　　之前有人问这里交税的情况，小孩子上学择校的情况，职业收入的情况。我只对税收稍微了解一些，关于上学择校，我只知道这里买房子看学区，如果是好学区的房子孩子自然可以去好学校，有些地方公里学校不好，大家把房子放私立学校，但是学费很贵，一般人去不起的。具体情况真的不太了解，希望了解的朋友补充。说到税收和收入，我会专门开个话题说一下。今天就先不说了。
　　日期：2015-10-14 00:02:00
　　在朋友家做客吃涮羊肉，其实美国羊肉片不好吃，有股臭的味道，因为这里屠宰不放血，血在肉里面就是臭的，一般买回来生肉都要处理一下，否则…………